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Masterpiece in Progress

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Weird style I used here. It's like some unrefined combo of greyscale and full color shading and just leftover sketch. I don't even know. But it looks good to me, seems to fit the scene.
I wanted to do it in a realistic style, but I scrapped that for some unknown reason. I'm kinda burned out on doing things in a semi-realistic style, because there's this one really big piece that I'm slowly working through that has to be PERFECT.
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Now to this drawing's credit, it does do a fair job at recapturing the scene form "On Your Marks". The blending and blurring techniques are pretty good, especially when it comes to the background, seeing how they help us stay focused on the Andy Warhol pony. In addition, I like how you're having him start with outlining her head and feet, showing the viewer how an artist begins paining a portrait. However, there are some major criticisms I would like to make. Firstly, Warhol needs a larger body, because right now, his hindquarters appear to be too big in comparison to the rest of his body. Enlarging it would benefit the piece. Secondly, Warhol has way too much head room. There shouldn't be so much space above. If I were you, I would crop the top so that it's just above his head. You don't have to worry about Tree Hugger, seeing how she's in the background. Speaking of Tree Hugger, I think you should have her standing on one hoof if the idea is to mimic the exact shot from the episode. On top of that, I'm pretty sure she has a bandana. Honestly, I don't think the piece is that, bad. I just think it needs a little work. Still, I advise you to keep up the great work, HyperDashPony!